Weekend Writing Warriors-Steampunk WIP Snippet 14
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I’m continuing to share from my current work in progress FPWL. It’s a companion novel to Dirigibles Are Forever and the beginning of a trilogy. This snippet comes a little bit after last week’s. They have finally ended up in the cargo hold, Clara’s goal for this trip. The tension between them is still running high. When they come to an end of the tour he asks her if it has lived up to her expectations. She’s non-committal. Here is Garrett’s response. We are in his point of view.
“Not good enough. I can’t let you out of here until we’ve fulfilled all your expectations.”
Even in the low light he saw the green sparks in her eyes growing bolder.
His cock hardened further.
She licked her lips, raising his body temperature few hundred degrees. She walked toward him, the definite swish of her hips twisting the heat inside him. He wanted to lay her out and feast.
Clara didn’t stop until she pressed close. “I believe the time for slow is over.”
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Posted on May 10, 2015, in Books, Danger by Dalliance, Dirigibles Are Forever, Rescue by Ruin, Weekend Writing Warrior, Writing and tagged dirigibles, erotic, fun, james bond, jane bond, romance, sexy, steampunk, steamy, swashbuckling, wip. Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.
Great tension. She’s got him right where she wants him. Why do I have this feeling she’s going to ask to see more of the ship rather than more of him?
I love how she makes him have an orgasm. I felt the tension all the way!
I totally agree. Slow is waaaay overrated! 😀
Sizzling excerpt, Tina!
He’s losing ground with his self-control there, and I bet she’ll tip him right over the edge.
WOW! Who said slow has any merit? Good job, Tina.
Oh the time for slow is definitely over! I’m sure he’ll agree, especially as you’ve described him in the moment LOL. Great snippet!
The woman wanting the seduction to go faster than the guy. How realistic is that? 🙂
Love it. sexy and tense at the same time