Weekend Writing Warriors-Tangled Redemption Snippet 18

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Tangled Redemption, book 4 in the Celestial Surrender series, is out in the world and this is my final snippet. I hope you enjoyed Sydney, Miguel and Jayden’s adventure.

Last week Jayden put the moves on Sydney and I had a few questions about Miguel. I hope this snippet, which is a little way after last week’s, will give you a taste;). We’re in Jayden’s POV.

“All right,” Jayden rubbed his hands together, “So, what should we do first?”

“First you will undress Sydney. Then you will lay her out on the bed and feast on her until you have brought her to pleasure three times.”

Jayden frowned at Calatrave. “Who has gone and made you king?”

The other Vampire didn’t respond but walked—no strode—to a large, surprisingly comfortable looking chair at the foot end of the bed and sat down, his fingers steepled beneath his chin, for all intents and purpose looking like a master waiting for his minions to fall in line.

Jayden paused. Maybe that was it.”

If you’re NaNo-ing this month all the best. Have an amazing week and as always Happy Writing!


Here is the blurb:

Sydney Radnall is no man’s toy, despite fate’s attempt to make her just that. A kidnapping puts her at the mercy of a sadistic Feral commander. Being held prisoner is bad enough, but her Naema blood is powerful. In her current Vampiric company her presence is like ringing a dinner bell.

In an attempt to break the commander makes her the pet of two of his lieutenants. Miguel is one of the most dangerous men she has ever met, but she can’t stop the attraction blazing between them. Then there is Jayden, a Vampire who is as surprising as he is sexy. Two Vampires she should not be attracted to, should not want to surrender to, should not trust.

But things aren’t always what they seem. Secrets and lies shadow their connections, making it impossible to see clearly. What are the chances of her finding lifemates while surrounded by enemies? And making the wrong decision could not just shatter her heart. It could cost her life.


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About Tina Christopher

Erotic Romance writer

Posted on November 2, 2014, in Tangled Hunger, Tangled Indulgence, Tangled Redemption, Tangled Shadows, Weekend Writing Warrior and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. Sweeeeet. Of course he’s the master. Such steamy snippets. I’d better go buy this book right now.

  2. Great snippet! Alrighty then Jayden, you have your orders, now get to work!

  3. Three… I like those orders. 😉 Definitely going on my “to-read” list. 🙂

  4. Well, he’s been given his orders. The question is, will he follow them? It’s what he wanted anyway…

  5. catherinewinther

    Interesting and steamy set up 🙂

  6. There is something sexy about the voyeur directing the show…yummy snippet

  7. I suppose Caltrave likes to watch. Just one thing: there is closing quotation marks at the end of the last sentence. I don’t know that’s a typo but it appears to be.

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