Weekend Writing Warriors-Danger by Dalliance Snippet 7
Welcome to the Weekend Writing Warriors. Each Sunday we share 8 sentences from a current or finished manuscript. Click here for the rest of the amazing writers participating.
I am continuing to share snippets from Danger by Dalliance, a historical erotic menage with steampunk elements. It comes a couple of lines after last week’s snippet. Archer is very attracted to Sarah, but she is not prepared to share the reason she needs money. Her distance drives him crazy and may have irked his temper a little bit. Not that she is calmness personified… I have used some creative punctuation;)
“Her tone of voice grated on his nerves: “If you were anyone else I would say pose for my friend, but I cannot see you being a model.”
She came half out of her chair. “And why on earth not? It is not exactly challenging to stand or sit while someone paints you.”
“Really?” He mirrored her pose and leaned forward until they were only a few inches apart. “Well then, if it is so easy let’s make this the condition for the early payment.”
“All right,” her easy acceptance drove him crazy. He still didn’t know why she needed the money, “And you will pose nude.”
I am travelling back from New York today, so it probably be Monday before I get a chance to read everyone’s snippets. I was at Book Expo America (BEA) and staying an extra day to enjoy the sights. And the banana pudding. A colleague of mine knows the best places for food across the city and I’m looking forward to discovering them;).
Have an amazing week and as always Happy Writing!
Danger by Dalliance
Sarah Rigdon is desperate. Penniless with taxes due, she can either beg mercy from the ruthless tax collector or turn to the last man she wants to ask for help. Archer Latimer stirs desires no proper lady would ever admit to. Though their meetings always end in quarrels, she can’t deny the heat between them. When he agrees to help, Sarah thinks her luck has turned. But she should have known nothing with Archer is ever easy.
Archer and his lover Warren Dorvee have spent years searching for the right woman to complete their family. Both believe luscious Sarah is the one and now have a chance to pursue her. After all, the price of Archer’s help is for Sarah to pose for Warren’s latest painting. Nude.
But trust has to be earned and a crisis in London threatens their love. The three must navigate through lust, lies and secrets or risk being torn apart forever.
Inside Scoop: Contains m/m, GLBT and ménage.
A Romantica® historical erotic romance from Ellora’s Cave, Amazon and Kobo.
Posted on June 1, 2014, in Danger by Dalliance, Weekend Writing Warrior and tagged archer, connected, erotic, hot, london, m/m, menage, new, new release, Rescue by Ruin, sarah, sequel, sexy, steampunk, steamy, victorian, warren. Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.
You have a gift for dialogue and use it well. Exceptional eight.
Thank you very much.
Wonder how she’ll handle his final condition for the loan? Interesting premise, enjoyed the excerpt!
Thank you, Veronica.
Ha! Can’t wait to see her reaction to that! Great eight.
😉
Oh boy, and the sparks are flying!
Indeed;).
Bet that last caught her by surprise.
Lol, it did;).
Enjoyed your snippet. Nice writing.
Thank you, Cara.
It’s not a real power struggle until someone issues the Nudity Challenge! 😀
Tina, this exchange just keeps getting better and better.
Lol, thank you, Sarah.
I don’t think it even occurred to her that he might ask her to be nude. I wonder what she’ll say in response to his demand?
If she’s desperate enough, it’ll have to be ‘yes.’
Oh, she is desperate, Caitlin.